Minggu, 29 Juli 2007

My Feeling's Says

Dear My Lord
Why you give me feelings?
so i could feel anything...
happy, sad, sunk, hurt, lost, n etc..
if just mede me hurt, better if i've none
I knew this a miracle
to every man include me.
Even the biggest miracle.
Even i ask you to take it away,
You'd never...
I've no power to have more choose..
By: Chocolove's
Sometimes i got some idea to write a poetry..
perhaps this is my first poetry, so i believe this not too good.
so friends, if u've more critic about this,
just write on the shoutbox..!!!

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